electronic copy: e-mail me at victor.leuci@westminster-mo.edu); the name of your attached file should be:

F11-227-P4-Last Name, First Name  (e.g. F11-227-P4-Smith, Joan)

paper copy: bring to class

length: 600-1000ish

sources:

Pericles' Funeral Oration in Thucydides; Apple Event on Oct 19 "Celebrating Steve"

Citing reminders:

you must cite your sources of information (facts, theories, etc)

every main body paragraph needs citations because every main body paragraph need concrete pieces of information to support what you say

for Thucydides, give the number in brackets, e.g. "No movement ever stirred Hellas more deeply than this" (Thuc. 1.1) or (1.1) if you've already mentioned Thucydides

for the Apple event mention the speaker, musician, or band at the beginning of your paper. You only need to provide in-text citations when quoting from specific songs sung--put the name of the song in parentheses at the end of the quote or include in the text of your sentence, e.g. In the song "Yellow", Coldplay sang: "Look at the stars"

should be very specific as the citations are evidence that you have looked at very specific, very concrete things in the texts, etc.

Works Cited "Page" reminders:

at beginning of paper

make sure the entries are in the same font and same size as your main text

make sure that you use hanging indents

for Thucydides, use what I've provided at the beginning of both print and phone versions.

for the Apple event, list the speaker/performer you used first.  Speech at/Performance at "A celebration of Steve's life." Apple Inc. 19 Oct, 2011. Web. date accessed. <url>

writing intensive:

don't forget to turn in the draft copy with my or the Writing labs' comments on it for it to count towards your revised paper total (and don't forget to make the revisions!)

print this out and bring this to your writing lab conference and have the tutor sign here: ______________________________________

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